blinging up other peoples comments.

Hello readers. Today in cyber smart we improved some peoples comments from all over New Zealand. 1st James showed us a comment and as a class we made the comment from a nice comment to a amazing comment! Then we went off to find our own. We had some comments to pick from me and my friend picked number 3. It was nice but they had no greeting :o , no signing off :O and worst of all they tried to be cool [which i'm sure they are] and used words but made them longer like wow=WOOOW! You see what i'm talking about. So then we went and changed it but of course it was not as awesome as James's example.Here is my improvement of the comment.

Thank you every body that read this post.Please comment it would really help...BYE!!!

A good blog comment.

Today in cyber smart we learnt how to make a great blog comment.
We used padlet to brainstorm all the ideas on what makes a good blog comment.Then we watched 2 videos of how to  improve our comments they were cool and helpful.After we went back on the padlet and improve,added and deleted the ideas.The video helped a lot.
Please cheek it out bellow :3

Created with Padlet

Hope you enjoyed this blog post a comment would really help me out.Be free to add your own ideas in...BYE! (^o^)