Hello readers. Today in cyber smart we improved some peoples comments from all over New Zealand. 1st James showed us a comment and as a class we made the comment from a nice comment to a amazing comment! Then we went off to find our own. We had some comments to pick from me and my friend picked number 3. It was nice but they had no greeting :o , no signing off :O and worst of all they tried to be cool [which i'm sure they are] and used words but made them longer like wow=WOOOW! You see what i'm talking about. So then we went and changed it but of course it was not as awesome as James's example.Here is my improvement of the comment.
Thank you every body that read this post.Please comment it would really help...BYE!!!
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