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Monday, May 15, 2017

The Character description of...

Hello blogging world, last week in class we had made a character description of a half human and  half animal, we made it on build you wild self. We used a Y chart to plan a personalty,actions and what this creature looks like.After that we put them into 3 paragraph and made the ideas into descriptive sentences.
Here is my plan.
  

And here is my writing.Her name is Ally.

Ally’s big fluffy ears help her to stay warm around the head in the winter time. Her reindeer antlers help her to carry buckets around to places , without holding them. She also has some scary and sharp shark teeth scare everybody away. Her sticky green frog arms help her jump to different buildings like spider man. Her billy goat legs help her to walk and run really far and fast.  They also helping her to balance. At the back of her she has some spectacular lion fish fins. When she walks they wave and fiddle round in the air making it hard to move.

Ally loves to cook. She has a job as a cook in Tomara Vill. Her arms make it difficult for her to cook because everything just sticks to her. Her ears help her to hear well. She uses them also in her free time to listen to music. She also has a part time job as a rescuer,telling people where the helps! ,screams and yelps are coming from. She isn't all a nice person she sometimes she likes to be a little mischief pranking all her friends and family.

When Ally isn't busy with her life she likes to take a risk and goes adventuring through the local jungles finding new discourses. She is super cheerful , cheering her friends on when they are doing a sports match. She also praises them to complete a test. She cares for her friends and family, but she also takes care of everyone in her village. She tries to help as much as possible but , sometimes she can't. She is one of the most calmest people in the world not panicking when earthquakes struck! Over all she is one of the most friendliest people you will ever meet in the world.

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2 comments:

  1. Hi Lily it's Joyce here form Room Hauraki.
    I really enjoyed reading your character description because you used lots of adjectives and interesting vocabulary. Your character Ally has some very weird features. I also liked how you added a link to the build your wild self website. I would really like it if you come and check out my learning blog @http://wpsjoycew.blogspot.co.nz/

    Blog ya later,
    Joyce

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  2. Thanks Joyce for the feedback.
    I will make sure to go and you blog and have a look!

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